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Hey brah, all of these are good and all, but if I may, I feel like you don't really need to re-upload them to NG as well. I mean, we've all seen them already, and since the old ones were SWF files anyways, they don't loose or gain quality depending on the resolution. Really all that changes is that you can view them in fullscreen, which, in my opinion, isn't worth a re-upload.

Yoshi-1up responds:

I learned to not keep things exclusive. That's how I got screwed over in the past. So I'm going to upload everywhere. You can't stop me. AAHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAA

This was actually pretty decent. I see it's your first submission to the site, so I'm assuming that it's one of your first animations as well.

Now, I wouldn't describe it as intense, but I was entertained by it. It could've used some music, you should definitely check out the amazing submissions at the Audio Portal. ;D

Basic coloring would've made a difference too. Try that out on your next work, as well as more frame by frame animation. Also, some of the angles were pretty weird. And example could be at 0:30, were the two guys were really close and looking each other in the eyes, and then suddenly they're far away from each other again. Perhaps you intended to show them in a sort of "split-screen" shot, I don't know, but if that was the intention, then again, colors would have helped.

Good work, though.

TheRealC-Star responds:

Thanks mang I didn't expect a detailed review like this I was just kinda messing around, but yea I agree it could have used a little more work I'll try and make my next one better.

Ok, listen, you want helpful tips? I have one for you: ANIMATE. What you submitted was a sequence of, I'd say, 4, maybe 5 frames altering and a motion tween. The graphics were... come on, I mean, be honest, aren't you surprised too that this actually passed judgement?
Let's get to the sound. If you go to Flash's publish settings you can modify both the event and stream's frequency, as well as setting the sound to either Stereo or Mono. Set it to Stereo, and adjust the quality and frequency to whatever you like. Just... not this.
The voice acting, you just need to practice. And get a good microphone. Don't voice act if you don't have the chance to get decent sound quality.
I'd like to specify that, while all this comes from a sprite animator, it also comes from a person that is INTO animating, so I do know what I'm talking about.

And one... last... thing... THIS IS FREAKIN' MADNESS DAY! Your "movie" has nothing to do with Madness (except for the characters, obviously).

Peace, and happy Madness Day. Man, the words "Peace" and "Madness Day" do not fit together. xD

Alphaman responds:

I value your critizm

For The 5 frame and tween thing, I don't know how to lyp sync.

For the graphics, The shading was kinda not that dark, i'll fix it next time <3.

For Sound quality, I needed to lower the music but 2lazy2lower.

Peace dude, and thanks for you're kind review!

This is the proof that non-flash videos CAN be posted on Newgrounds. I've always been against it, but this... THIS... this is an exception. Great work, 1up. Absolutely epic.

Yoshi-1up responds:

Thx man appreciate it ^_^
Hopefully the NG video player comes out so i dont have to do it again lol

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